Scene 1- int. MORGUE
A dead female is atop of a table in a morgue. A DOCTOR
approaches her and proceeds to slice a straight line through her chest. He then
pulls out a saw/rib cutter and begins sawing the ribs. DOCTOR reaches his hands
into her chest and begins pulling out her organs.
Doctor
Liver...
DOCTOR places the liver onto a small set of scales.
DOCTOR
1.6 kilograms.
DOCTOR takes the scalpel again and this time removes the left
kidney.
DOCTOR
Left kidney...
DOCTOR places the kidney onto the scales.
DOCTOR
120 grams.
DOCTOR removes the other kidney.
DOCTOR
Right kidney...
DOCTOR places the kidney onto the scales.
DOCTOR
122 grams.
DOCTOR removes the heart.
DOCTOR
Heart...
DOCTOR places the heart onto the scales.
DOCTOR
310 grams.
DOCTOR rummages around in the woman's chest. He pulls out a
dictaphone and speaks into it.
DOCTOR
Looks like the stab wound punctured the stomach lining... lots
of internal bleeding.
SCENE 2 –
int. multi-story car park
The car
park is full of police cars, policemen and an ambulance. There is police tape
cutting off a small corner of the car park where the audience can see a white
police tent. DETECTIVE walks into the tent and kneels down to examine the body.
He touches the stab wound with gloves on and looks up at CORONER.
DETECTIVE
So, do we
have any leads as to what happened here yet?
CORONER
Cause of
death appears obvious…
(gestures
to the stab wound)
but you’ll
have to wait for the full autopsy.
DETECTIVE nods
slowly.
DETECTIVE
Any
witnesses been spoken to yet? CCTV footage been checked?
CORONER
A few
officers have spoken to people at the station but we’ve had no luck yet,
somehow no one seems to have seen anything. We haven’t checked CCTV though.
DETECTIVE pulls
back white cover on the body and a frightened look crosses his face. He reaches
his gloved hand under the woman’s coat, pulling out a bloody playing card. DETECTIVE
and CORONER exchange concerned looks.
DETECTIVE
Another
Knave of Hearts murder?
(whispers under his breath)
Shit.
DETECTIVE places
card in a bag and pulls the cover back over the body. CORONER appears deep in
thought.
DETECTIVE
We’ve
determined a supposed home base from his murder locations, we’ve began a search
there but…
(shakes his
head)
scene 3- int. MULTI-STOREY CAR PARK
WOMAN is walking towards a lift whilst talking on her mobile
phone, carrying a large collection of carrier bags.
woman
Yes John, I remembered to get that present for Sarah's
birthday... Some sort of decorative wine glass? It cost a tenner from that
small charity shop we both like... yeah, that's it!
WOMAN chuckles to herself, as she enters the lift and pushes a
button to the next floor.
WOMAN
No it doesn't make me a cheapskate that I like to look for
bargains. Honestly John I-
The rest of WOMAN's sentence is inaudible as the lift goes
down. WOMAN walks out on the next floor laughing and heading towards
the ticket machine, continuing to talk into her phone.
WOMAN
How did Tom and Harry's football practise go then?
There's a long pause as her partner (JOHN) replies to WOMAN,
and in this time WOMAN grabs a ticket from the machine and heads back to
her car.
WOMAN
You bought them some of that fast food rubbish. I told you I
had a fruit salad at home!
WOMAN rolls her eyes, then smiles to herself at JOHN's
response.
WOMAN
Ah dear I do love you guys, even if you're all going to end up
with food poisoning! Anyway, I better be off now, I'll-
WOMAN stops mid sentence as she quickly turns around holding
her phone to her chest, with the sudden feeling someone in watching her.
john
(through the phone)
Ok sweet. I love you!
WOMAN doesn't hear this, and holds the phone back up to her
ear, visibly anxious.
WOMAN
Yeah, yeah... see you.
WOMAN quickly hangs up and rushes to the boot of her car,
hastily shoving the bags in. WOMAN walks to the side door and fumbles with her
keys before being approached by a hooded figure.
WOMAN
Can I help you?
WOMAN avoids eye contact with the man, clutching her hand bag
close to her chest. The man reaches for WOMAN's bag but WOMAN tries to run. The
man grabs her before she can go anywhere, and one plunges a knife into her
chest. WOMAN's bag falls onto the floor, causing the contents to spill out- a
photo of WOMAN and her family can be seen. The man bends down and places down a
playing card.
SCENE 4- INT. MORGUE
DOCTOR puts the equipment away before removing
his gloves and lab coat. DOCTOR walks towards the door and grabs his bag. He
then puts his coat on, and on the table next to the door the audience's
attention is drawn to a pack of open half empty playing cards. DOCTOR picks
these up and puts them in his inside pocket, before leaving the room.
Good/excellent work on scripting; well done!
ReplyDeleteI agree - well done guys
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