Thursday, 25 January 2018

Rough Cut 2



With this draft we only decided to make a few small alterations:

  • Luke's dialogue in one shot of scene 1 is overpowered by the music and cannot be heard
  • The wind can still be heard in scene 3
  • Change the credits as it does not suit the genre
  • Spelling error with Luke's name
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  1. Miss Mac13 May 2018 at 13:14

    Evidence of excellent work on shotlists, layouts, drafting, scripting or storyboarding.
    Evidence of excellent organisation of actors, locations, costumes or props.

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